FreeWriteHouse Party Day 11: It's The Appetite That Paid The Bills
Appetite
The family tried everything. They had taken her to see many doctors, dieticians, shamans but nothing eased their mind. Now that she was an adult, and a healthy one, it is what it was. And besides, it was her appetite that paid the bills. Her dtube channel had been Top 10 channels viewed for some time nowl. All she did was eat and eat and her followers seemed to love it. Her rewards most times hit over 1,000 SBD.
Today, she was part of a different kind of challenge. And even though there was some contention from the other participants in regards to fairness, there were no grounds. Just because they knew what she was capable of wasn't reason enough to disqualify her. She had to give them credit for trying to be No. 1, even if it was a coward's way.
She had been in many challenges before, and won most of them. She had guzzled a beer barrel in under 20 seconds. She had eaten 112 hotdogs in under a minute. It has been a crazy ride and even when she signed up for this challenge, she knew she had been in training all her life. She would set a record in the inaugural Foodie Eat-a-ton.
It wasn't a marathon for the weak stomached. Only the brave and the fast would pull through. Every km of the 42kms, there was a food station. You ran or walked, stopped at each station and ate exotic or popular foods from around the world. Station 28 had eggs that were semi formed. There were feathers and she was sure she felt a beak in there somewhere, and you had to eat 5 of those. Most gave up at that station. Some throwing up even before they had put it in their mouth.
She would only admit this to herself, she was feeling the strain catching up but she was so close to the finish line. She could see it, the flags waving in the wind, the crowd screaming...her footsteps like thunder in her ears. In her head she kept repeating, Don't throw up! Don't throw up! because that would be a disqualification. 6 more steps. She will go down in history as the fastest and meanest Eating Machine. 3 more steps. People were reaching out for her, urging her, cheering her.
Someone brushed her as she took her 2nd last step. She turned to look and that broke her momentum as he crossed the finish line a split second before she did.
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What an interesting mask @kaerpediem. This story made me laugh, I hope it isn't based on experience?
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I like that it gave you a laugh ...
Experienced only in my head 😁
Thank you for reading @raj808
What a pity, she lost? She sounded like she did so well, had it together even with the eggs with beak and feather, yikes!!!!!! You write so well, @kaerpediem. I got a bit nauseous at the part when I read about the feathers and beak. I told myself not to throw up cos it sounded so real!!!
The egg got most of us!! And to think it’s real ....
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading the story @happycrazycon
Wow, interesting story!
Haha, I have heard of those eggs that people eat with the chicks... gross! I could not eat that! For one, it just grosses me out, and for another, I dont think eating baby animals before they have had a chance to live is ethical....
Like the story idea, and the ending, we thought she was going to win, but bam! She didnt...
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Those eggs are called Balut ... it’s a delicacy in the Philippines
I couldn’t eat that either ... I would have been one of those who gave up at station 28
Thank you for reading @squishysquid 😁
Haha!
Have a great weekend!♥
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I don't know why I am so upset... but man. I've seen videos of people eating those half formed birds/eggs and gag OMG. What a horrifyingly wonderfully great and terrifying story you've written.
I would gag too
But it’s a delicacy in the Philippines 😅
Thank you for reading @byn
So happy you liked it 😊
wow, after eating 5 half-hatched eggs and loosing at the last couple of steps!!!! NOOOOO
Hahaha ... maybe there’s still a happy ending in there somewhere
Thank you @mariannewest for stopping by to read
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112 hotdogs in minute. I will be totally and a defeat in such competition.
Oh dear, a he emerges to outbeat her. Who is that he?
Such an interesting freewrite ;)
Yes who this fella??!
Make him who you want him to be @iamjadeline .... hmmm I wouldn’t mind knowing too haha
Thank you fo reading 😊
I was pretty sad to read she didn’t win after all she went through. That egg one made me gag a little, it sounded so gross. I like all of the details you added in along the way. Nice freewrite~ 😊
Don’t be sad
Maybe there’s a happy ending in the bigger picture ...
Thank you for reading @crosheille
That is very true, thanks for that ;)