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RE: One Last Ride (Part I): Popoy's POV

in #freewrite6 years ago

There's something odd about the POV here - seems that it's not really what it seems, but I'll just read on to the next part and not spoil anything :)

What I love the most is Popoi's emotions here. His acceptance of what's to come next and his love for Loise really shows. Beautiful writing, Maine.

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Nyahaha. Yes, there is definitely more to the story Jazz, and good job on spotting the oddness in the story. 😂

Thanks for the usual support. ☺

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