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RE: The Wire: The Hunted (Serialized Suspense, Part 10)

in #freewrite6 years ago

Thank God you only keep that wire handy for hanging pictures cuz that's creepy, when I saw you with that wire "My body lurched with revulsion just thinking about it." lol that was my favorite line today, I could think for days and not come up with such a descriptive line painting such a powerful picture. And the cops there are AWHOLE lot better than any cops I've dealt with. Most cops would be like " yeah ok well file a report."
another fantastic installment Bryn!

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Ha... I know what you mean! Thank you for the awesome feedback :)

(also, there is no 'r' in Byn, but I get that a lot. I didn't even realize Bryn was a name until people kept thinking it was mine!)

oh shoot I know there isn't an r but I just mispelled it. jeez sorry.
bytheway that's a very unusual name, is there a story about that or what kind of name is it?

I actually wrote a post about it (it's a bit of a story) if you're interested What's in a Name, What Happened When I Changed my Name

yes Ma'am I'm very interested, I'll check it out thank you!

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