5 Minute Freewrite Prompt : confirm

in #freewrite5 years ago

Sarah was moving as fast as she could. Time wasn't on her side, not at this very moment. The movers are due to arrive anytime soon and she was nowhere near 50% of her packing. She knew that she made a wrong call by waiting till the very last minute to this. But, she had no choice. The amount of work was piling up and packing was totally the last thing on her mind.

Sarah. It's confirmed. You're moving down to Strassboard on Friday. Make sure you plan yourself out and don't be late for your first appointment with Dean Paul. He doesn't like people being late.

That was the last message her mentor said to her. It still sounded like it was just a couple of hours ago that she last saw Dean Paul. Will he remember her after all those years. No one knew about their history and yet fate brought her back to seeing him, really soon.

Memories flow back to her.. Twenty odd years ago to be precise.

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Dean Paul and Sarah Pallion was a couple, THE COUPLE! Everyone envied them as they were the perfect couple of the century back in high school. Everyone was expecting them to get married after school since they have been high school lovers since kingdom come. Both parents were even making wedding plans for them.

No one actually knew what happened. Why did they decided to split up ? No one except themselves. They agreed never to speak of the decision that caused them to go separate ways. It was mutual.

Now, twenty years later, Sarah had to face Dean. How would he react? How would she react?

Whatever, it may be, she knew this was meant to be. Whatever the outcome maybe, this was something she needed to do. Finish it off for once and for all. There's enough loose ends in her life. And this was one of it.


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Cute Gif! I also like Free-Writing, I might create one later I guess ;) Interesting read, I think what makes them split up is because they are already bored from their current relationship. They have no reason to work out because they dont see a purpose. IMO

I'm not sure myself.. I just kept on writing ..more like my fingers were the ones in control, not me
That's what I like about free writing

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Ooooo! Why!?! Excellent secret set-up!

Ha ha.. Thanks so much

Good luck Sarah!

Oh yes.. she does need a lot of luck.. so do we

nice writing - you definitely took me along on the ride :)

Thanks for staying with on this journey...
I hope for a continuation to the twist

I should have expected a cliffhanger because it's a freewrite... Anyways, nice one. And as always, I'll ask for sequels...even though there might not be any :)

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I did sequels in some of my previous Freewrites. But somehow these days the sequels connection doesn’t seem to come out.
I’ll try again

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I really enjoyed reading this.

Well, am here to deliver the weekend freewrite prompt to you.

Take just one, write with us
Easy freewrite, no pun, write, don't pause.
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https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-5-4-2019-single-prompt-option
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Thinking of trying the trinity of it
Come on in, take it one by one, bit by bit.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/aws2g-weekend-freewrite-part-1-the-first-sentence
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Do have a lovely weekend.

Oh yes ... I’m definitely in for the weekend Freewrite .

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I really enjoyed reading your #freewrite, @ireenchew. Very interesting story line and characters. This might be worth turning into a longer story!

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it

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