Burning -5minutefreewrite
For https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-295-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-burning
Boom shaka laka
Kaboom
The dance floor got too hot.
Scorched.
Ignition.
Alcohol burns fast and clean.
But when our bodies lit up,
It smelled delicious.
Can't stop dancing.
Dancing on TNT.
Kaboom shaka laka
Bang goes our hips
Bang bang
Pop like firecrackers.
Friction from our feet
Hot like
Rubbing two sticks together
Or you're the flint and I'm steel
But a little bent to one side.
Rubbing till we ignite.
Fire. The dance floor goes kaboom ka-boom
Dance
Dance
Dance
Dance
Finger dance
Funny dance
Don't matter what kinda dance
It moves our bo
dies.
Bod
Dies
Bodies dies.
Ignite
Like Fire
Ignite
Burn
My arms waving like water, but just blowing on you.
Bodies blowing
Bodies bodies bodies
Fire air Oxygen
Eating up all the fire
Fire
Fire
Fire
Fire
Hot Hot hot hot Hot Hot hot hot
Drop it. Pi
I like the rhythm, the word choices, I can hear a beat. Very cool. Or should I say... hot? :) I'm amazed at what you do with the free flowing free verse and word association. It's frenetic, but there's purpose, and it builds upon itself. That's hard to do (for me) without time constraints, let alone in five minutes.
Thank you! I really appreciate the praise! I had some fun with this one, double entendres kept rolling through my mind. I felt very cool, I mean hot, while writing it.