I like the rhythm, the word choices, I can hear a beat. Very cool. Or should I say... hot? :) I'm amazed at what you do with the free flowing free verse and word association. It's frenetic, but there's purpose, and it builds upon itself. That's hard to do (for me) without time constraints, let alone in five minutes.
Thank you! I really appreciate the praise! I had some fun with this one, double entendres kept rolling through my mind. I felt very cool, I mean hot, while writing it.