Chasm between Wildflowers and Human (freewrite)

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

Wildflowers,
I admire the adoration you are being showered,
Day and night you gaze to the sky,
Being cared unrelentlessly and being loved unconditionally.

Wildflowers,
Your life is care-less and free,
No commitment nor responsibility,
Just breathe in the air and absorb all the water, and take it all in.

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Wildflowers,
If only I were you, I would gladly swing around,
Sway to the right and left,
Following the direction of the wind.

Wildflowers,
If I only I were you, there will be no tossing to and fro,
Going up and down, busy chasing after the earth's antropy, and sometimes still zero to be endowed.

Wildflowers,
Shining brightly, standing proudly,
Arraying the fields beautifully,
Dressing the lands gracefully.

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Human, oh, human
If only we were you, we get to subdue the earth,
To reign over the lands,
Opportunity to command and conquer.

Human, oh, human
You would never comprehend,
Our desire to have legs and mouth,
The ability to promenade and serenade.

Human, oh, human,
We admire your long life,
To keep adoring us,
And also keep destroying us.

Human, oh, human,
Can't you see, we wither and we perish,
While being loved and adored,
Consistently being plucked and put ashore.

Human, oh, human,
Yes, we are proud of our beauty,
But just by one click of your fingers,
We will easily be put asunder.

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Took extra 5 minutes for human oh human.

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I enjoyed your poem very much! I wrote as wildflowers like women, so interesting for you to have voice of flowers to humans--I liked to conversation you developed between the two.

When I saw the prompt, I was yearning for a life so care-free, hence the poems. But then as I wrote, the reality sinks in that we human have higher destiny. So could not help but to add another 5 minutes for the 2nd part. thank you so much @kimberlylane for your compliment.:)

I really enjoy your post, especially I love the photos, they are beautiful..

thanks for sharing post

Wow! I love how your writing can show me another world, its too good—way too good!

Glad you like it. I learn so much from all the freewriters :) Thank you @michellpiala.

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I really do admire and enjoy your freewrite submissions @iamjadeline! You make it look so easy!

It becomes easier as I write more. I wasn't so smooth in the beginning. Thank you so so much @jaynie 😘

@iamjadeline practice makes perfect they say 😎👍

Your poem is so good and your creativity is on another level to think of the conversations between these two. A superb read. I bet many are going to recommend this as their favorite read this week, @iamjadeline! :)

It started off as I imagined my life being a wildflower. so free and easy and relax. Later on, I got to embrace my higher destiny as human. Thank you @happycrazycon for always supporting.💛

Nice one @iamjadeline
There's always 2 sides to the story 😊

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