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RE: 5 Min #Freewrite- Hook

in #freewrite6 years ago

Oh yeah, we definitely need more joy, more...something, not sure what it is, but I know we're missing it.
I really like this bit, by the way:

The hook,
its barbed,
it doesn't just slide in and out for fun.
Catch and release, still suffocation.

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I sort of use joy as that word, which is all of those things we know as children and sort of harbor as adults. I've never met a person who didn't know it, no matter the words they used :) and thanks for the prompt, I feel tired and trying to make an excuse to skip, but HOW can I skip 5 mins- its such a perfect trap lol

I sat down to do it and what was forming in my head was way too intense lol. Skip day after all ;)

I agree with marianne. I have worked through some past trauma stuff in my freewrites, I"ve posted some really morbid stuff, some erotica stuff and seriously, some vengeful-wishful thinking stuff related to my childhood. Intense is good and I think it can help you feel better, too! It sure helps me!

@byn @mariannewest Im not very restrictive in my speech or writing but it was my Oma's trauma and it felt too much too soon. I know as I get comfortable here and as a more public writer it will come out. Being quiet has never been my strong suit lol ❤😘

That is understandable. <3

totally cool. Of course, you only share what you want - just saying don't worry about us. Are you German since you have an Oma?

My dad's mother is Austrian, and married a second gen Norweigen who was over there under Patton. My mother's side I have a Grampy (Irish- also second generation) and a Memere (French canadian/ abernaki). I'm an early American special blend lol ;)

Nice - we like special blends. And yes, Austria has lots of Omas :)

Do you also have an Oma?

I did - Now, I am one LOL

Never be afraid of sharing intensity here. Check out @byn and @wandrnrose7 for some pretty intense stuff - and a lot of others. Feel free to express whatever comes up...

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