Jesus, this is beautiful - I really, really love it, especially this:

And you want to rescue the children trapped inside

There is so much imagery in this single line, it's just amazing. Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your poem! Keep this excellent work up <3

Anyway, I'm in charge of delivering the next prompt (which I really hope you'll do), so there ya go:

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-187-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-nail

_{Click the graphic to join in the fun!}