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RE: Weekend Freewrite 4 - The First Sentence
LOL Sim - nice write.
Would make a line break before: * those were the living ones. *
There is a deeper meaning I can see...
The upstanding neigbor, the friendly guy next door, the smiling woman who always dresses oddly - just a bit. That dog catcher... ewwww...
Happy Weekend!