To friend or to kill #freewrite

in #freewrite6 years ago

Most of the time Tim is friendly, making friends left and right and even below yet his friend of one week was not a welcomed company. Whining, he shook his body hard in an attempt to throw his friend off. He doesn't think it is working though, so he rolls around on the floor.

Most of the time Tim is not a murderer, but when he felt a certain splat, no matter how soft the soubd is, he was overjoyed. It did not last long cause he felt his friend clinging again... and this time said friend brought other friends.

No no no, dealing with one is enough for him.

"Tim? Tim are you okay? "

He looked up, all disheveled, giving his hooman the saddest eyes he can while his hind leg keep scratching through his fur.

"why why? " She asked, waddling over to him then ruffling his fur. "hmm.. " She pulled back her hand and gasped "MOM!! TIM HAS BUG!! MOMMY BUG!!! "

Oh, so that is his friend's name?

his other talker hooman walks over to then and shooks her head while taking bug away with a tissue and squashed it.

Tim wondered if he is a bad doggo if he feels slightly happy.

"We need to go to the vet, you have fleas, oh you poor thing. "

Tim wails and tried to run away, the vet is not someone he is fond of.


I have a secret to tell, I love writing from animal's pov.

This is a freewrite for @mariannewest prompt. It is kinda the fastest prompt that gave me idea on what to write. Cone join us and let your mind di its thing!! There are so many great stories and great people here.

Personally I dislike flea a lot. I apologize for any spelling or grammar error, writing this with phone hehe

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Oh yes, the dreaded trip to the vet!!!

HAHAHAHAHA every pet's nightmare.

that is a fun POV and a really good exercise!

Uninvited "friends" are the worst! (Although, who ever wants fleas?) Poor Tim isn't having a good day. Love that you wrote from his point of view!

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