I like it but in episode n. 5 I'm looking for a twist (no stress). The four episodes are finely written and you depicted every scene with mastery. See, for instance, the beautiful moment of the car's headlights filtering through the window, or also the draft cascading through the room of the previous episode and, generally, all the characters' reactions. However, in my humble opinion, to better hook the reader you need to add more substance other than suspence. However (again), yours is the only story in episodes I read here on steemit so far. Twice.