5-Minute Freewrite: Abandoned Buildings
Credit to @the.artist-98
He is fond of abandoned buildings. So fond that he always search online and travel every weekend just to explore these buildings alone. This weekend, his target is the old office building just a few miles from his town. He sets in and when he arrived, brought out his flashlight and camera. Old, abandoned buildings don't scare him. In fact, it fascinates him. Something pulls him inside this old office building. It was definitely a new thing since all the other buildings he had visited was special alright but all are just hollow and empty. This time, going deeper in the said office he saw a shadow exiting towards the door fron the far right corner. He believes it is his first time but something tells him, that leads to the rooftop. He followed the shadow, slowly opened the door and ascended in the staircase. Another door is at the peak of the stairs and when he opened it, he was right. He stepped in the rooftop and searched for the shadow. He heard a faint crying sound and then
Sorry to cut it short, I am done with my 5 minutes but haven't finished the story yet. Anyway, promise I will be a better writer next time and avoid cliffhanger. If you want to create your own 5-minute freewrite for this prompt, read here.
Thank you for reading!
February 9, 2018 - 12:34 PM
nice
You haven't finished it yet but the story is still as good as complete
Thanks sir hehe
I think cliff hangers are the best! Great freewrite. Thanks for sharing.
I loved this!!
I'm hopping from Freewriter to Freewriter dropping the prompt for the day!
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Well done!! I love the premises that he is exploring old buildings!!!