“Echo”, a poem for 5-MinuteFreewrite Day 346-Music
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Poetry has always come more naturally to me...
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Should I care about the silence in this shore?
in adagio
filled with fog
a place of slumber and gloaming sadness
sometimes I hear an echo
sweet and graceful
deceiver of my heart
a remembrance
It comes sailing
from the great beyond
but it doesn’t stay
it doesn’t reach
should I care about the silence in this shore?
the echo is but a name
a laugh
and I feel again the music is lost in the waves.
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This is beautiful! I usually do not like poems very much, but yours speaks to me.
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This is so beautiful and melancholy. Thanks for sharing.
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This is wonderful....