5 Minute Freewrite Day 472: Sale

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It was my turn, again, to work as the bodyguard of another wannabe aristocrat, one of those previously common people who suddenly got rich and since they didn’t have the education and grace of the nobleblooded, they tried to save face by being more exuberant in their expenses. They threw coin here and there, buying more luxury items far quicker than they will ever use.

Today, they hired me as additional muscle, because for being a still healthy and young woman they saw me as a “nicer to look at” presence than their usual employees, but still strong enough to keep them safe against any threat that they lives could suffer in the dark corner of the already black market we were getting into. Their vices and need to overcompensate had called them to the illegal, and in the few hours that I’ve been alongside them, I could feel them being as nasty as any lawbreaker that walked around, and then some more.

Our guide, a tiny man wrapped in dirty clothes and with only 2 teeth left in his mouth, carried us trough narrow passage after narrow passage until reaching a building with all opening blocked except for a back door. Once inside we went through a hidden trapdoor that opened to reveal a foul smell, like sweat, blood and excrement that were not completely washed away, and beyond that, chained against the wall and dressed in a poor attempt at appearing clean, dozens of individuals from various races and ages, their beaten faces a mix of hunger and fear. The small and dirty man smiled proudly while saying:

Everything is on sale, I hope you find something to your liking Signore…

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Very dark stuff. I was hoping the woman hired as "muscle" would do something to the old guy who gets that haunting last line of the story. Alas! I choose to believe your timer went off, or ou WOULD have had her save all the trafficking victims!

As a matter of fact, yes, the timer was the main agent making me stop here, but also, I knew that if I kept going, it would end up being reaaaaally long. Alas, the idea is for the mercenary woman to help out the slaves, but I still don't know how. We'll see.

Never mind how long it takes to get the job done... send that woman mercenary back there and get the job done!!! You owe your readers now. We will settle for nothing less than MORE MERCENARY WOMAN! :)

And if you're still thinking she may not actually be a mercenary on the side of the slaves, well.... I'll just stop reading you! Ha!

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