Day 71- Five Minutes Free-write. Prompt: Toothache. Title: Little Tommy.steemCreated with Sketch.

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Little Tommy was a greedy urchin, who ate more than his fair slice of pizza.

Little Tommy was a mischievous bumpkin who grabbed more than his fair deal of the toffees.

Little Tommy was a sweet tooth who ate more than his fair share of his candy.

Little Tommy was turning ten and all he wanted for his birthday was a little cake…”to share with my lovely friends” he told his dear mother…”a little token of what their friendship means to me”...he explained.

On the day of his birthday, Ma made a honey cake and lifted it off the counter holding it up in her hands... ”for you my little one,” she beamed.

Little Tommy had no patience for that. He only wanted to get to school on time, or so he told her.

With one last ruffle of his hair, She handed him over the honey flavored cake and he smiled at her.”...thanks ma,” he purred.

Little Tommy was a Greedy boy. Off to the school, he took a turn, and landed in the school's backyard. Wolfing down with both his palms, little by little the cake went down. What friends, he laughed, “Well, they can get their own cakes.”

Little Tommy felt a dull throb in his gum, days later. And then it heightened....little Tommy hated dentists...but it was too late, he had to go.

He should have paid more attention to the teeth pulling tool, because he lost more teeth than he ever even had.

Little Tommy is a man now....little Tommy is a gummy little man.

This entry was inspired by the #freewrite daily challenge by @mariannewest

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lol, he must know now that having no teeth sucks.

uhhh, Let me try the triple prompt...sounds interesting :)

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