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RE: Day 83 of the 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: nose ring

in #freewrite • 7 years ago

LOVE it!
She spoke and spoke and her talking was a lava river in full words rushing fast in front of the mirror.
she skewered her black hair with a hairpin
Then all of a sudden she stops ..silence..
she demanded an answer from him that was not a "um" "yes yes yes"
Wow!
You nail it. And I love the ending. :)

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     7 years ago 

    Wow, thank you @carolkean for your comment. It's very encouraging knowing that it comes from a fine writer like you!

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks, and you're welcome!

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