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RE: The Truth | Lola's Story Part 29 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: travel

Story Club

Are you enjoying @freedomtowrite's story as much as I am? I always find myself wondering where Lola's adventure will take her next and I am curious if you are too. I wanted to invite you to Story Club where we can share our thoughts on each new part and reflect on where the story began. With @freedomtowrite's permission, I will be posing a few questions after each new part in the hopes of sparking some lively discussion. Are you in?

Part 29 Questions

  1. If Kyle knew he was in danger, do you think he left a sign for Lola that it would be ok for her to eventually find love again?
  2. With Tommy being the young age of 13, do you think Lola will regret asking him for help? Will this quest put him in too much danger for his young age?

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Cheers, Aimee

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This is getting more interesting... The suspenses are killing.
My thoughts, What was this danger Kyle saw or knew of that killed him? Why would he leave a sign for Lola? Who or what was responsible for his death?

I don't know why he would leave a sign for Lola letting her know it will be okay for her to find love again. Yes she might move on later on but why did these letters surface now. Something doesn't feel right.

The suspense is killing me too. Kyle must have been onto something only he could trust Lola with, maybe it involved her dad too seeing as he is a detective. I also want to know who was responsible for his death and if Lola will run into his killer! Dun, dun, dun...

@freedomwrite you're beginning to make me feel like I'm seeing a seasonal movie ... Her Dad???? Mmmmm if he thought he could only trust Lola with this secret why did he put Mark in the picture? @freedomwrite help us o!

Maybe he looped Mark in because he knew he'd keep her safe and knew Lola had a past relationship with him? Hmmm... so many questions! -Aimee

Tom sounds like a Smart kid. I doubt Lola would regret getting him involved in this situation. Danger? Mmmm... For his age , I can't tell. We'll find out soon.

You're right, Tom does sound like a smart kid. Maybe he will be the more level headed of the the two.

My thoughts on part 29

1. If Kyle knew he was in danger, do you think he left a sign for Lola that it would be ok for her to eventually find love again?
So far, Kyle has shown that he was a always thinking a little bit ahead. If he knew his life was in danger, he probably also knew that Lola would have a hard time moving on. I definitely think Lola will come across a sign, when she's ready, letting her know it's ok to move on.

2. With Tommy being the young age of 13, do you think Lola will regret asking him for help? Will this quest put him in too much danger for his young age? For me the answer is two-fold. I believe that going on this quest together will continue to strengthen Lola and Tommy's sibling relationship but I have a feeling that Tommy will want to get involved beyond his maturity level and end up getting himself into a little bit of trouble.

Cheers, Aimee

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