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RE: Is that a threat? | Lola's Story Part 34 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: clouds

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Whoa, Bryon! Bold move. But don't be so sure of yourself, especially when Kyle clearly knew that Lola could hold her own ground.

Story Club - Everyone's Invited

Are you enjoying @freedomtowrite's story as much as I am? I always find myself wondering where Lola's adventure will take her next and I am curious if you are too. I wanted to invite you to Story Club where we can share our thoughts on each new part and reflect on where the story began. With @freedomtowrite's permission, I will be posing a few questions after each new part in the hopes of sparking some lively discussion. Are you in?

Part 34 Questions

  1. Initially I thought BE/AC 1120 was another message but Tom said something in this part that made me think twice. Could these letter, in fact, be initials? Could the B stand for Bryon perhaps?

  2. Were you as surprised as I was that Bryon had Gloria fooled with his charm?

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Cheers, Aimee

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My thoughts on part 34

  1. Initially I thought BE/AC 1120 was another message but Tom said something in this part that made me think twice. Could these letters, in fact, be initials? Could the B stand for Bryon perhaps?

    Maybe they are initials. Maybe it is before/after. All I know, is I really want to know. Hopefully, @freedomtowrite, er, I mean Kyle doesn't keep us guessing for too long. Does anyone know what the date is in the story? Could Lola's anniversary be approaching? Maybe Kyle set something into motion that will happen they day of their anniversary.

  2. Were you as surprised as I was that Bryon had Gloria fooled with his charm?

    Uh, yes! But to be fair, Lola was being charmed by Bryon too until Mark tipped her off. One things for sure, Bryon didn't keep up the façade too long after he felt like Lola was onto him. I'm just worried that Gloria will unintentionally sabotage Team Lola by giving Bryon her trust and access to their house.

Cheers, Aimee

Don't forget to leave your thoughts in the comments below!

Q1: B for Bryon? Nah, I refuse to think... Wait what if it is a username/password to something

Q2: Yes o I was! . That why I'm not comfortable with him moving few blocks away from their house. I don't like this at all.

Hmmm... Username / password? Could be! There are just so many possibilities. Hopefully, Kyle doesn't keep Lola guessing for too long.

Right? Gloria! What the heck!? You've just invited danger to afternoon tea! -Aimee

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