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RE: A Face in the Crowd | Lola's Story Part 22| 5 Minute Freewrite ~ Prompt: important

Story Club

Are you enjoying @freedomtowrite's story as much as I am? I always find myself wondering where Lola's adventure will take her next and I am curious if you are too. I wanted to invite you to Story Club where we can share our thoughts on each new part and reflect on where the story began. With @freedomtowrite's permission, I will be posing a few questions after each new part in the hopes of sparking some lively discussion. Are you in?

Part 22 Questions

  1. Is Lola overreacting to Bryon's actions now that Mark has issued her a warning?
  2. Why do you think Mark didn't recognize Bryon, could he be an imposter?

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Cheers, Aimee

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My thoughts on part 22

1. Is Lola overreacting to Bryon's actions now that Mark has issued her a warning?
I want to believe that Bryon's intentions are honourable, though I have a nagging feeling that his actions are being driven by other motivating factors. Hello, mystery envelope! I think Lola should follow her intuition if Bryon's actions are starting to make her feel nervous or uncomfortable.

2. Why do you think Mark didn't recognize Bryon, could he be an imposter?
I don't know about you guys but I did a double take when Mark asked Lola about Bryon. If he was warning her about him earlier, surely he should know what Bryon looks like, right? This part has me very confused and eagerly awaiting the next part.

@freedomtowrite you are up to something fishy, aren't you!
-Aimee

Don't forget to leave your thoughts in the comments too!

Hahaha I love all of your thoughts! I really enjoyed that Mark did not recognize Bryon...but why???

But why is right! But why? Am I going to have to wait a whole week to find out? -A

Haha I'm hoping to write part 23 today!

I sure hope you do! -A

Ps. A while back you mentioned being accepted to a writing course. Are you still doing that too?

I haven't started yet, I am still working on funding...but I want to! Thank you for asking!

I hope it works out! I don't just check in on Lola you know. 😉 We are friends now. You're stuck with me, and I wanna know things! Ha ha ha! -Aimee

Haha! I love it! Thank you!

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