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RE: Magic | Lola's Story Part 38 | 5 minute freewrite ~ Prompt: dew
My thoughts on part 38
How do you feel about Lola's reaction to the kiss; full of both wanting and hesitation?
Initially, I had completely mixed emotions about the kiss. Obviously, I want Lola to be happy but I keep wondering if it's too soon? I feel like the kiss cut all the tension that was mounting between them and their reactions were equally perfect. There was so much wanting and desire, but at the same time so much understanding and trust. You can tell these two have a deep history.
Do you suspect they'll run into Bryon on their way to the next clue?
If they don't run into him, I have a sneaking suspicion he won't be far behind. With him living downthe block, he'll have his eyes set on Lola's place for sure.
Cheers, Aimee