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RE: First Timer - 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: airplane
This is a very well written short story! As a debut, I can say is great! I can say more: I recognized myself in the story, I'm afraid to fly (and this for my unlucky history) and yes ... I would do it for my beloved! I recognized a sensitivity in your writing that I would not have suspected.
Thank you. When I was a child and didnt know better, I thought flying was fun. Now Im older and more cautious. I would still do it to meet the lady though!
Of course, I agree with both, prudence and the lady!