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RE: She Came in through the Kitchen Window - Day 577: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: window
Wonderful read. Quite a bit there to digest, way more than I can ever get in in 5 minutes! I love your idea for her getting away from her abusive husband, that's a novel plan. Those boys were happy to get the benefit from "Danny's mom". I hope Dwayne never catches up with her. There's a wide open ending just wanting for more story...
Thank you so much for your time and attention to this story. It took me waaay more than five minutes, as usual. I love the insights and ideas on "what will happen next" that readers like you bring to an unfinished story. You would be a great addition to the Beta Reading group, and that reminds me, I haven't checked gmail for new manuscripts to read and comment on. Eep!! The things I overlook! You have reminded me now. Thank you!!!
Oh my. I love your bio!!!
@blueeyes8960
I'm a retired Harley riding crypto loving g'ma. I like to read and write and enjoy learning new things. I'm married to my best friend and we love to travel.
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@carolkean I am already in the Beta Reading Group. I was given one project that I completed a long time ago, I haven't seen anything else coming to me.
Just found Heart's Desire - BEAUTIFUL story, beautifully written! - and tweeted links to it.
"Heart's Desire" by @blueeyes8960
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@carolkean Thank you! And thanks for the extra exposure!❤️