I love the description at the end, of her fainting, and also the one of Maria's bleeding foot. The poetry side of you there I think ;)

The exchange between Aggie and Carlo was also awesome, her words appropriately menacing, cryptic and revealing in just the right ways, and his angry, defensive words in response rang true. This is beautiful work Janelle!

I'm wondering whose car just pulled up, and how Carlo's sister is going to manifest in his life away from the context of the seance...