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RE: Day 131: 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: solitude - Broken Part 6 of Lola's story
Ahh! So brutal and honest this short piece is. Like the brother's speech. And wonderfully written, the story deftly told in a few quick strokes.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the speech, it was fun to write and think of how an impatient little brother might sound. If you get a sec, please read the other parts..I'd love more feedback!
Omi goodness, I never saw your response here, or I would have gone back and read these sooner! So glad I'm catching up now :)