RE: Finish the story, earn steembasicincome shares and upvotes! Day #2
Every day was the same on the surface. The same framework of events: he rose at daybreak, drank cold, clear water from the spring, then climbed to the high rock above his campsite to practice cosmic breathing technique, and to give the promptings of his inner world a chance to bubble up to consciousness. Then a long hike, through the flowering canyons, down to the warm, welcoming meadows or up, up to the snow line, to the barren heights. Then home to a fire and evening prayer. Then bed.
Every day was the same on the surface, but marvelously eventful in the details: finding a new patch of berry brambles. Observing the playful activity of beringhi along the creeks. Listening to the curious song of a bird he had seen before but didn't know the name of. Finding a new melody, himself, on his flute... these events became enormously significant and satisfying, each one absorbing his attention in the moment. And when the moment passed, there was always another fresh, interesting experience to engage him. He woke every morning with a child's excitement, an uninhibited eagerness to see what this new day would bring. And always, that feeling of joy in his chest: soon, he would be with his family. Soon he would be a guardian.
But there was time. No need to rush. This place was so beautiful.
It would be years before he realized what the challenge actually was.
This is truly cool. I would exasperate it and make him become a prisoner of beauty forever. Bravo!
Hey thanks man! I loved the beginning, it definitely inspired me to come up with my own ending. I'm going to follow these and continue to contribute, awesome writing and contest :)
I saw people taking out unexpected incredibly creative things, I'm happy because this wants to be a way to push us out from the ordinary and share wealth. Your imagination is already one of the finest i found here have to say. Thanks for your support my friend 👍
Aw thanks! Love working with your material, looking forward to doing more :)