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RE: A Punchline In Search Of A Joke—Five Minute Freewrite
What a clever way to call someone a neanderthal, I thought the whole joke was funny. A two punchline telling.
What a clever way to call someone a neanderthal, I thought the whole joke was funny. A two punchline telling.
Well, thanks @bashadow. I'm glad you liked it all. It kept threatening to get away from me. Hardest part with these particular pieces is knowing when to stop so you can cut your losses if necessary. :)
I rarely know when to stop, and the read through had a good timeliness to it. So I think it was ended just right.