Freewrite 5 mins : Day 122: Spa

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Well after short conversation with @poetrybyjeremy tonight I have decided to give it a try.

It seems nice to delve into the Freewrite waters : P Also The Prompt Inspired me Instantly for a story so I have everything planned and I am setting up my timer for 5 mins... and the story goes...


Last year I have decided to change my work a bit and delved into the SPA business. I had a friend who was opening a new branch of his firm in my town and he offered me a position there as a Manager of Marketing and Sales.

At that time the proposal was great for me as I was looking to change my working place anyways so I did accept.

So as every start it all was looking awesome... I did not have exact timetable or working hours. I had to just finish my work and than I was free to go. First we started establishing a nice entry strategy to the market as the competition was quite only one brand.

It was obvious from the start that we will be having problems with the competitors as it was only one firm holding the big brand names in the whole country... even the region...

So we were acting in secrecy and preparing a Website and Marketing Campaign with Catalog of all products that we offer.


Well I have to say guys this is really boring but the 5 minutes have gone :) If you want me to continue the story :) I will gladly do.. Well I did it ... My first Free Write I hope you like it guys. Thanks for this great initiative @mariannewest it was great fun to start the #freewrite :)

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I enjoyed this. I could sense something brewing; but unfortunately time's up! that's the thing that is nice about freewrites, it almost always leaves you wondering what happens next.

Yeah even I was so caught up I did not feel when the time passed ... Was disappointing too for me when I realized it is all over.

The good thing is that you can do this every day :D

Welcome to Freewrite, and thanks for your nice contribution! I've posted my first Freewrite yesterday, too, and like you I felt a bit in the middle of it when time was up. But the good thing is: It takes "only" 5 minutes, and it also helps "letting things go", even if you consider them to be unfinished. Which, btw, doesn't necessarily mean that your readers think it's unfinished. Despite saying this, I still have to "get used" to this and was very hesitant to post yesterday, but it's an extremely good exercise. And on the plus side: you've created something new, "finished" or not - and that's amazing!

Yeah it is nice way to spend 5 minutes that is right. :P I fell so into it that I think I might start doing stories and long pieces not only poetry as of now :) So this is definitely a way to start something new and exciting :) Thanks for stopping by I am going to read your :P piece now. God Bless. Peace and Love.

Yes, it's always good to try something new :) I've been trying some poetry now and then, though I guess it's not "really" my thing. But I love poems, and I can still remember a poem that touched me deeply about, uhm, almost 30 years ago ;) I'll definitely have a look at your poems during the next days :)

Well. I encourage you to start writing poetry. Since I have created the poetry community there have been like 5 new poets that emerged :) So I don't see why you can't be the next one. We have just started our first Community Poetry Contest too :) Feel free to :) give a go at my poetry I have made around 200 ++ poems :P for the two months I have been here :)

This sounds awesome! Thanks for hosting the poetry community and telling me about it! I'll definitely give it a try soon :)

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Thank You. I was going to search for it later but I guess I do not have to do that now. How convenient of you thanks. God Bless You. Peace I will jump on it :P soon for sure.

Welcome to freewrite im new here, you are a natural writer!

Thanks well I am quite new as well :) To steemit and freewrite. Thanks for your kind words... I might go into full retard mode and start writing some stories lolz :P Have to see how this free write goes first. So I will continue to explore :) hopefully something good comes out of it.

Fair enough! See how the flow drew and dripped your creativity. You might want to continue the story.

And i think today's prompt offers a good opportunity for that. I mean, you could make a twist out of it.

Did you not have to fumigate your new office before you moved in? or maybe it is your competitor's office that needs fumigation, as one of your sale points against it! lol.

Try it out.
I am an encourager for #freewrite today, and i am excited to make a special delivery from @marriannewest: Today's prompt.

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-123-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-fumigate

Continue the flow of those creative juices @angelveselinov> make your second freewrite, and continue the fun. Meanwhile, pass #freewrites regards to @poetrybyjeremy for leading you to this nest!

Cheers!

Aaarghhh...i notice my fellow encourager for today @marie-jay has already visited you with today's prompt...no worries. Now you have two reminders! Double love!

Hey well I would love to continue the story but that has to be just how it is not with prompt ... :p But thanks for the nice suggestions. I think I saw your comment right after I wrote that story... lolz So anyways ... ;P Thanks for the encouragement. It has been a pleasure ... Check out the new freewrite if you like... God Bless. Peace and Love.

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