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RE: Cough Syrup and Cold drink. Prompt : syrup #freewrite
Haha~ I relate to this somehow... I always kept a sweet things to change the taste of medicines whenever I get sick.
I think this story could be better formatted. Like dividing it into paragraphs, as readers don't like big chunks of text without line breaks.
The cough syrup is indeed too sweet and I don't like the taste of it.
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll do it.
The post looks way better now!! I included this in my Daily Picks.
Last thing, I suggest avoiding watermarked pictures on your posts, because most of time they are watermarked for a reason.
Thank you. I will surely keep that in mind from next time. :)