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RE: Day 33: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Hair

in #freewrite7 years ago

My Entry, It took exactly 5 minutes:


With the new year nearing, each one of the young couple wanted to give their spouse a gift... but they were a poor family...

She found a gift for him but to buy it she needed more money. she thouyght her husband is more important than her and she cut her hair and sold it to buy his gift.

In the night her husband returned and found her hiding her head... he told her to come to him, he has a present for her. a hairpin.

She showed him her head and told him that she sold her hair to buy him a gift... a hand-clock holder.

But he said he had sold his hand-clock to buy her gift...

The couple was sad because each lost something important, but they were happy to know how much they love each other.

[The End]


It's a rewriting for the classic story: "Gift of the Magi" from my memory and with my style... The original is better, but I didn't find time to come up with something original.
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Yup - an old story :)

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