BABY (5-minute Freewrite)
BABY (5-minute Freewrite)
a 5-minute Freewrite by A.E. Jackson
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If you'll permit me, I am going to challenge myself to stay in the same story for all the 5-minute Freewrite Prompts for the month of February! Let's see how this turns out...
"Oh baby, yes," she said. The ecstacy in her scream bounced off the small cabin walls.
Ilana's hair fell over her left eye, and obscured her view. She tumbled off the side of the bed as the smooth silk comforter slipped over the edge. Her head hit the floor, and she rolled with the grace of a drunk man onto one side.
'Oh! Come on.' she thought. 'Give me what I want!' Ilana's hands groped and her arms stretched. Her legs pointed toward the ceiling and her toes curled as she squirmed around. Head on the floor. Night shirt slipped down, crumpled around her chest. And her bottom swaying as she flailed about.
The sound of wet kisses filled her ears. Pants and moans of passion rolled over her in waves, almost in time with the whitecaps crashing against the ship outside her open window.
"Yes! Finally," Ilana yelled with rapture. She spun over and sat on the floor by the bed. Pointed the remote at the television. And clicked the power off!
She was still trying to figure out how the dropped remote could turn on the adult movie channel the next morning over mimosas.
T O B E C O N T I N U E D . . .
© 2019, A.E. Jackson. All rights reserved.
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🚨"Do the Hustle" prompt with Uncle Bruni🚨
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She might as well watch it, if she got charged for it. 🤤