Heaven is a dump - Freewrite

in #freewrite7 years ago

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Attics are a museum of life and times gone by. Relics from the past, favourite childhood toys, school books from 1987, football boots from the bygone days of Georgie Best, crystal and china jostling for position. An impossible mix of tradition and times gone by. Many items used to have pride of place on a mantle-place, on a foot, the epicentre of children's fun and imaginations gone wild.

They somehow lost their appeal, were outgrown, were replaced and ended up in the cool, damp, lonely air of the attic. Faint echoes vibrating through the rafters from below are a reminder of a time when they were needed. Those far of days of youth, fresh from the shop, released from the grip of plastic packaging or cardboard box. Useful, worthwhile, warm, essential. Breathe in the admiration - they shined.

So different now, in this cold space, cut off. They all wish they were Christmas decorations, forgotten about for 11 months of the year, but then dusted down, brought to lower climbs, pride of place, the fresh and fragrant smell of pine, children playing, adored for 4 whole weeks. Bliss, fulfillment, relief, warmth.

Jim, the hoover has been here longer than anyone, and doesn't speak much anymore. There is a whole family of suitcases here that have called this space their home for too long to remember. Each carried a pockmark of imperfection, and were cast aside.

Then the day comes, half of us are released from this godforsaken place. The road trip in the skip is sublime, as the fresh air and rain infuse our cores. Our new home is magnificent, a metropolis of the forgotten, but best of all it's outside.

They call it a dump.

We call it heaven.
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For those not familiar with the freewrite, you basically have 5 minutes to write a story, beginning to end. Then post it to your page.

A big thanks to @mariannewest as always for keeping this going.

This weeks prompt was "The Attic" and the post can be found here https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-133-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-the-attic

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I like this idea: sort of a Toy Story world for discarded stuff. Thanks!

Thanks @wordymouth... Actually, now that you say it, there is similarity for sure :o) Loved that movie, might watch it with the kids today, as we're snowed in....

Pieces in the attic have developed personalities and are stiving for freedom in a dumpster? Reading too many kiddy books, are we? Haha - i can't talk (I'm watching Thomas the Tank Engine at the moment). It's all good fun!! Well done! 😄

Ha ha ha... Definitely... I love all the kids book... My two boys are big into books, we got both of them into them from a really young age, and they both get 2 stories before bed every night... It's actually really helped with their speech and vocabulary.. Thomas the tank is a huge favourite here as well, I know about 50 of the engine names at this stage :o)

LOVE your take on this!!!!!!! make me smile and happy for old suitcases loll

You have worked very hard today and now it's time to relax your mind while doing today's 5-minute Freewrite prompt! Prompt: Plaid

Thanks @snook Those suitcases are liberated after decades in that dusty attic!! Thanks for the new prompt..

they call it haven - but for how long?

Yes good point @mariannewest, but at least they are outdoors and can see the sun and the stars... The disadvantage of having no legs, is you stay where you're put... Although tables and chairs do have legs I suppose :o) :o)

Agreed - but the next load is coming to the dump - what then? :)
See - I think about those things lol

Then they'll have loads more friends with attic war-stories!! :o)

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