It was the first thing that came to mind :) Unfortunately I'm not really science-fictiony, so a secret world of fantasy awaits! :D Thank you for reading!
It's very tempting! :) I need to find something to write after my current Steemit Story is concluded and this idea is looking to be a good contender! Thank you for reading :)
Very enjoyable story, @kaelci! I love the fantasy and sci fi elements, and I think it would definitely be an interesting topic to explore in a longer story!
Oh my, what a lovely little world you've painted... What beautiful world lies beyond the tear in the sky? I can't help but wonder... Really nicely written piece that leaves this reader wanting more..
I really like the reference to the tear in space and time. It leaves me wanting more.
It was the first thing that came to mind :) Unfortunately I'm not really science-fictiony, so a secret world of fantasy awaits! :D Thank you for reading!
I love this, it definitely sounds like something I'd read if you do decide to expand on it!
It's very tempting! :) I need to find something to write after my current Steemit Story is concluded and this idea is looking to be a good contender! Thank you for reading :)
Very enjoyable story, @kaelci! I love the fantasy and sci fi elements, and I think it would definitely be an interesting topic to explore in a longer story!
Thank you! ~ I think so too :D the cogwheels are already turning, thinking about how to expand upon this little universe! :)
Oh my, what a lovely little world you've painted... What beautiful world lies beyond the tear in the sky? I can't help but wonder... Really nicely written piece that leaves this reader wanting more..
Thank you! :) I can't help but wonder also ~ I'm already thinking about what could be lying beyond and what adventures could be found.
@kaelci Thank you for not using bidbots on this post and also using the #nobidbot tag!
upvote for me please? https://steemit.com/news/@bible.com/2sysip