Capitalization notes for this chapter:

• When the word "professor" is immediately followed a name it should always be capitalized as well (e.g. Professor Fjelstad, Professor Holm). If the word is used as a noun by itself, then it's okay to have it in lowercase.
• You were good and consistent with "New Zion", but you missed the very last one of the chapter (in the final paragraph, you wrote it as "new Zion").

He had to assume the Giant mountain of muscles coming up the stairs had killed her.

• Giant -> giant (unless Xavier's nickname is "Giant")