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RE: Lecture; From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Parth Three Chapter Six
Just days after he had gotten to terms with the fact that his feelings for Rachella were more than just an infatuation. She sacrificed her life for him!
infatuation. She -> infatuation, she
(It should be a single sentence, not two separate ones.)
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