Original text:

Matatu might have been an exceptional soldier and a war hero respected by the troops for his tactical insights on the battleground, the fact that he just addressed him as Admiral Kotu in the fucking Hotel foyer told Dakila Matatu might not be up to the task.

Corrected:
Matatu might have been an exceptional soldier and a war hero respected by the troops for his tactical insights on the battleground, but the fact that he just addressed him as Admiral Kotu in the fucking hotel foyer told Dakila that Matatu might not be up to the task.