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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part Two, Chapter 2
There are a several hyphenated words that you use which should not be hyphenated.
"Lieutenant-Colonel" should be Lieutenant Colonel.
"sound-proof" should be soundproof.
"drone-swarm" should be drone swarm.
"North-American" should be North American (unless you are referring to a specific organization that goes by that hyphenated name).