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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 8 (draft)
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He had to ignore his senses, his instincts as here neither couldn't be trusted.
The double negative in this sentence got me confused, then I saw that it made no sense. There are several ways to fix this.
- He had to ignore his senses, his instincts, as here neither could be trusted.
- He had to ignore his senses and his instincts, as here neither could be trusted.
- He had to ignore his senses and instincts, as here neither could be trusted.
- He had to ignore his senses and instincts, as they couldn't be trusted here.
- He had to ignore his senses and his instincts, as they couldn't be trusted here.