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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 3 (draft)
Other capitalization issues/questions:
The "2025 health insurance act"... is it referring to a generic health insurance bill, or a specific piece of legislation with that actual name? If the latter, then it should be "2025 Health Insurance Act".
"Baroness" and "baroness" are both used, it should be one or the other throughout the text.
By "lord", is Gwen referring to another member of nobility in her family or to God? If it's the family member, then it should be capitalized the same way as Baroness or baroness. If it's God, then it should definitely be capitalized as "Lord".