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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 3 (draft)

in #flashfiction7 years ago

Multiple errors (grammar and typos) in this paragraph:
No time to explain my lady, the Barones gave me orders to pick you up right away. I am so sorry for being this direct, but I will need to humbly ask to accompany me to the car straigt away. Transportation is waiting for us at Logan Airport.

Fixed version:
"No time to explain my lady, the Baroness gave me orders to pick you up right away. I am so sorry for being this direct, but I need to humbly ask you to accompany me to the car straight away. Transportation is waiting for us at Logan Airport."

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