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RE: From "Ragnarok Conspiracy"; Part One, Chapter 3 (draft)
Just like last chapter there are issues throughout with quotation marks missing from spoken words and conversations. Right off the bat, the first paragraph should read:
"I am never going to get my head around this quantum entanglement stuff before next week's exam", Ilse said while looking worried at Gwen. "I am definitely not going to get anything above a C for this one."