Hmm... Interesting ending where have to see here on this very post (verbose I know). One of the most evident features is the transformation scene and the fact that the Cap'n seamlessly goes in-and-out without a care in the World. Here 'tis easy to spot-check the talks of the Lass Cap'n going nuts being a call towards Wither bein' nuts. Or at the same time Wither being right and the Cap'n being truly haunted by unholy spirit.
But our ride ends not here, for corpses are strewn about and a mystery of our favorite hunters are certainly in the air. The true tipping off point that confirms both views: as simply the ship could've been blown away or taken down with mystical powers. Truly, the reader's tipping point comes damn straight at the end with the jail scene.
Yet nae does Wither sit and mope around. He's curled about and rocking in a fetal position; the readers' true point whether they get it know or can't see the contrasting views of insanity of the Cap'n or shipmate Wither. Truly, a tale of both dæmonic qualities and plays on the descent of insanity. Yet, if fleshed to a more serious 1000-5000 word post, then maybe the descent would be more perceivable with Wither recounting from the cell how the Cap'n been acting strange and trying to justify his hatred from the "dæmon" that took her over.
However, the early call-out to Wither explicitly lining out a general trend of some pirate crews on policies towards women was made clear. Which could've influenced how he couldn't fathom and pathologized the entire scene when they leapt to when they come back as a Kraken-esque scene. To which, the fear of his Cap'n's shenanigans finally threw him over the edge and to displace himself from probably the creulty happening on the hunters' ship, he places himself in a story of the Cap'n doing the brunt of the work in a ghastly form. Thus the dysfunction is to displace the reaction to bloodshed and efficiency of the pirates, he imagined a dæmon Kraken forming from the Cap'n, who certainly is influential, and pins the blame on her. All so he can avoid feeling guilt in aiding the Cap'n, in his career, and just say that she tricked everyone and she's the only one responsible for the pirate's actions. Certainly an interesting prospect to humour.
Wow!!! Thanks for the in-depth perspective. It was a joy to read.
How could I even try to match such a deep comment? I want to repeat that your progresses are evident and solid. I liked the fact that you touched the theme of the curse/demonic in sea stories, which was unedited in this edition
The climb to stand upon the shoulders of giants proved to much for this one, eh? We’re going to have to work collectively together to reach this top. 🙃
After 35 weeks running this I can say that I'm not in a race for the word's quantity hahah.. Plus I'm very confident with the in-depth work I apply here when evaluating. Working together is always welcome, you're right in this ✌️😎