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RE: My Entry for Finish The Story Contest - Week #52!
- Memories -
far, far, away from them;
burn it all down in a fury
of fire and catharsis now!
But what’s the point to run
and run away from them if
they come back from there
and begin haunting again!
They say "burn, burn, burn!"
But ain’t nobody gonna heal
like that, fires only work in the
forests for it provides nutrients!
So own up to the memories,
take the Leap of Faith to now
and conquer the dæmons which
now resides in your big brain there!~
Yes, that is another good take. If continued maybe they would return and his voice would crack again.