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RE: The Heritage - Finish The Story Contest - Week #51
But the biggest lesson of all, make sure you check the monetary value a universal commodity, like the Bruvna, has in comparison to other commodities. A lesson we all should be aware about, but one I think shouldn't bother to pinch at the lassie's actions. As she was completely justified at beating up that dumb buffoon that do anything to get a lil' bit richer and not worry about surviving.
- Jail stuck -
and stuck in the rot of life's low
in a cell not in a country of hers -
yet maybe worse than theirs
Still cursing at letting herself
be tricked by the tragicomedy
that was her partner getting
always excused by her mind
Pondering why she would do so
she didn't want to even think it
as it makes no sense why she'd
to defend herself but he free from it
Tossing and turning,
the cell door bells ring
and a suit comes in -
a smile finally on her
I guess Larry used the 37 million to hire a good lawyer and get her out of jail...
It's a good ending for my ending ;)