RE: Dark Road. Finish The Story Contest - Week #49
Psst!!!!~ USE THE WORD "THEIR" INSTEAD! IT'S GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT AND REFERS TO BEINGS OF UNKNOWN GENDERS! PECK WHATEVER YER ENGLISH TEACHER TOLD YAH, HISTORY, LANGUAGE AND MODERN SOCIETY ARE ON YER SIDE! VIVA LA @bananafish! (Sí, es: @bananafish. No es: @banafish...)
Why, an empty road it is rather splendid for the dark night of a very dark and, yet not so but maybe so, macabre prompt. Oh it tickles the jester in me to see this. Ho! It is a sight to preemptively hint at what we shall see, methinks it so at least!
La filosofía: A return of the consciousness after being interrogated round after round by the unconsciousness. Told it had sinned and sinned it did! Why a sinner's sinner so sneered the unconsciousness. It told all the little things that it knew the consciousness couldn't bear, knowing that it wouldn't want to be made whole with that hole in its life. So the consciousness returned to the forefront and leaped into action; determined to no more be tormented by the unconsciousness for the wrong-doing it had made! Chasing a chasing! Skirting the edges and making sure to chase the entire van alright and making sure it was disabled alright. And before I sound like a broken record with the word "alright," may I say it was alright for her to finally realize it at the last moment and chase the baby. Truly, a mother that cares and accepts that the problem of the baby is not only the baby's and crook's problem but equally hers as well! Brave, what a brave lassie! Hey ho to the one that let her consciousness act on her unconscious desires! Ha hargh!
La forma: Why I love the Tell that courses about the stream of the post, I can feel it ooze unto my skin and melt me away to a Gay goop. For thou hast (you have) done a Dialectical achievement in this post to unite Show and Tell together. The unity of telling when appropriate and showing when the World needs to see the action itself to know we are moving! I see your jester abilities grow upon the World, so embrace the Chaos and Order of telling a story! I see your English becoming perfected that I cannot tell from translation of a bot to a human, the differences collapsing! Even the human error as @gaby-crb pointed out is present with the spelling mistake, thou art (you are) truly growing! So keep on a marching and keep on a posting! Let's go and make more stories!!!!~
Otro super comentario de mi recientemente apreciada @theironfelix (me da la impresión de que eres chica
, pero no tengo la menor idea jajaja). Por cierto, tus pequeños tips sobre el idioma inglés me encantan! 
Ok. Volvamos al inglés!
I already corrected the error of the name of the bananananafish account ...
If you knew that I had always asked myself when I should use "their", because the English language does not have gender like in Spanish. But thanks to you, I finally had an answer.
The dark road, I thought it was a good title because I wanted to make the reader understand several things, the path that Shannon was taking led to a dark, malicious, tormenting road. And in the end, this new path that she takes, even when it was literally dark, led her to an uncertain future but more in line with her own consciousness.
I like to know that even though English is not my native language, my stories are understood, that is, English speakers can understand what I want to communicate.
YAY! Let's do it
De nada, de mi amigo (Bueno, me siento como una mujer ahora. ¡Gracias por el apoyo! ~UwU~). Y de nada para mi tips sobre el idoma inglés.
Well that's great~ and welcome again for the tip on the word "their" now!~
Auto-analysis of your ending, but still true for both of our views.
Welcome to the club and LET'S DO IT!!!!~