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RE: Finish The Story Contest Week 27 Apocalypse and Pretzels My Entry
Ya next time I will try to stick to one perspective this time I skipped some stuff I would have done to better say who was talking cause I didn't want to have the extra words but your right. It makes it a little confusing.
Fixed a few typos.
I usually change it only once .. about verbs, I never change the time of narration from past to present.. it's always about the reader 😉 It's a good work, keep it up!