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RE: Apocalypse, Kindness and Pretzels. Short Story-A finish the story entry
Get the point. But the hero here is the third party -Martinez. His contribution it may be miniscule- but that is what helped tip the scales. Apocalypse, KINDNESS and prtezels
Yes and I get yours.. From my reader 's pov, I've to say that the epic part was an immersive and coherent experience and my enthusiasm went there.. the kindness of Martinez maybe can play an unexpected role in the sequel.. that would give it a value. Anyhow, bravo @sarez!