You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Waiting for divine help.- SHORT STORY. A finishthestory entry
Full Marks for you @calluna . That was my aim- waiting does not mean sit and stare - rather it means live and prepare And it applies to waiting for help, for a break, for good times, for the right girl, for the Divine even!
I also love your approach. Clever and original. Apparently, there were many "wise" ways to end this story but the risk behind was that of an easy moralistic or superficially spiritual interpretation. Marco made things quite easy but tricky at the same time. In your story, I appreciate the effort of communicating something new and personal.
Thank you!