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RE: Break- My Entry for #finishthestory
I like how you've described the state of complete alienation among a group of people. A bunch of shadows masking their loneliness with alcohol and the appearance of having fun. )
This is exactly the idea I was trying to express.
Experiencing violence does damage to the the normal way of thinking. I tired to underlay this theme.
It is nice to see that the story engaged you.
stop peaking into my daily existence!
ahahahah....