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RE: Special Edition - Finish the Story and Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest Entry - @bananafish
I must tell you only good, for your ability to weave the haiku in the story in an organic way, including that for the Mizu No Oto. The story that emerges from the veiled words of poetry is not far from what I had thought, even if this is secondary.
Thanks @marcoriccardi. Tried my best to keep each stanza true to haiku while telling a story. Keeps it fun. Good to talk with other writers like @theironfelix and get ideas.